Bold Bradley

One dark but clear sunny day sitting in the movies was BOLD BRADLEY. His hair is dark black and it is as long as a horses mane, very tight blacks skinny jeans and a black t-shirt and a dark grey jacket. To go with the fashion he wears a pair of vans which are light green with white poker dots. He is a rake and about 1 metre and 45 centimetres tall. Bradley has also got a light tan covering his arms and legs as well as having a pretty round face with a little bony chin poking out like a rubber.

Bradley has lots of moods but the mood that I usually see is his smile which is a bent sun. He is basically always happy and he is quite funny by telling jokes. Last but not least he is quite kind to his friends, his mum and dad by doing jobs without arguing as well as his two brothers and his one sister (sort of). Bold Bradley really likes to game on his three Nintendo ds’s and his two Nintendo dsi’s, his x-box 360, his black wii and his playstation 3. He likes to ride his bike to school and down to the park to do jumps, tricks and crazy stunts. Something that he scorns to do is to clean his room. It is a pig sty. The floor is so messy that you can barely see it except for a few spots and it is covered with toys mostly and dotted with some food rappers (but not many of them). Some of his friends that he hangs out with are Oliver, Daniel B, Jack, Josh, Dylan, Jed, Jordan G, Jourdyn A, Josh F, Anthony, George and I but that is only what I know.

Sometimes Bradley plays on his x-box 360 or his playstation3 all day until it his bedtime (which is about 10:30pm) then he starts to play his ds or his dsi all night until about 2:00am, and then he turns them off and goes to sleep. The morning after that he sleeps all morning until about 3:00pm in the afternoon and he is terribly tired. The next time he tried to play on one of his ds’s it turned on. Then it started to sizzle until it turned off and it was stuffed.

So that is the description of bold Bradley who is a real person and not a made up character and who really does like to game all night.

By B.K.G Matthews (Jonny)

Fat Fred

Drooling over American hot dogs slouched Fat Fred. Fat Fred is a dreadfully plump guy. He loves to eat hot dogs dripping with onions, mustard and tomato sauce. He adores all kinds of ice cream and is crazy about chocolate. Fat Fred has jumbo ears, he looks even more weird with no hair, lots of scars and has a black monobrow stands out a lot. I think he needs to shave his tummy it is so hairy and has a and Fat Fred is quite rancid he smells like rotten eggs. Since Fat Fred doesn’t have any money hi clothes are rugged his sleeves are torn up, one is long the other is short. Gumboots are the fashion for Fat Fred so he wears black gumboots; his pants have holes in them as he keeps tumbling down the stairs they got torn on the knees. Lots of people wonder why he can’t button his pants up well it because he is so fat so he uses bailing twine to hold them up.

Fat Fred doesn’t have any friends as a result of having a ruthless personality he is a very beastly man. There is no job Fat Fred can accomplish because he is lazy, uncoordinated and doesn’t listen to anyone. Once when Fat Fred was tramping down Kiwi Street he scarfed a little girl’s triple chocolate ice cream and gobbled it up in one mouth fill then he shoved the little girl over. She grazed her knee and was a sad baby for the rest of the day. Bzzzz Fat Fred was tasered to the ground by the little girl’s mother, “you filthy fat man you should go to jail’’ she screamed out loud. Now, Fat Fred  is a lousy guy because he doesn’t have any family they all died in a huge fire so Fat Fred lives alone down the main  ally way. He is a lonely guy who only lives with stray cats but there are also lots of mini mice which he doesn’t like at all.

 Fat Fred doesn’t do much he normally steals ice creams off people, sneaks hot dogs from the stand and at night he robs the chocolate factory.    Sometimes Fat Fred gets so hungry he feels like eating a herd of cattle. Fat Fred doesn’t eat decent food he fills his tummy up on yuck food out of the garbage or steals junk food off people or out of shops because he doesn’t have any money to buy things like burgers or steaks not even vegetables. A lot of people feel sorry for Fat Fred but they are too scared to give him things or money because of what he has done to them in the past.

This charter description is not true but I hope you enjoyed my fictional charter description about Fat Fred.

By Cheyann McDougall.      

Daniel's finished Character Description

Exciting Emma

On a very hot, sunny, musty day 18 year old Exciting Emma strolled out of her house in Hamilton on her merry way to work in the wood works store making shelves, tables and cabinets. Her short curly blond hair shimmering in the blazing sunlight and her dark orange sunglasses shielding her eyes from the blinding light. Her night black sneakers slapping the aged grey pavement with every step she took and her heavenly white t-shirt fluttering in the cool refreshing breeze. Emma loves lego with a passion and absolutely adores the colour orange, in her spare time Emma likes to BMX and mountain bike. Emma is a very kind hearted girl and always thinks of everyone else. She is smart, fit, very truthful and very thoughtful. Emma has quite a few friends like Alice, (the shy one) Ruby, (the smart one) Charlotte (the athletic one) and Sarah (the understanding one).
One day, out of the corner of Emma’s shinning blue eyes she spotted something blowing across the deserted street. It danced around her black sneakers. She picked up the paper object and examined it. “It’s a fifty dollar note” she whispered to herself with a grin like the cresented moon. She was so happy you would think she had just won lotto.
Emma has a little brother, a little sister and her dad down in Wanganui and she goes and visits them whenever she can. That $50 Emma found on the street wasn’t for her it was for her little brother and she also got a little something for her little sister and she didn’t forget her awesome dad. So that shows how kind-hearted Exciting Emma really is.
This non –fiction story was written by Emma’s little brother: Daniel.

Amelia's Completed Character Description.(Published in this week's school newsletter!)

Amazing Annabel

Lying in the middle of a swimming pool lay, surrounded by friends, Amazing Annabel. She was a sloth the way she just lazed there on her floating sunbather twisting her short, golden brown hair around her fingers complete with long white finger nails. Her hazel brown eyes darting all around the heated pool making sure her things were still in her locker and there they were. The dainty little blue and white checkered top she wore that day was hanging out along with her plain black skirt and red and white trainers.
‘Annabel get of that phone now it is ridiculous how much girls gossip nowadays you talk so loudly you are like a peacock calling that there is trouble!’ She begs her mum for a cellphone because all her friends have one but the answer is always NO ANNABEL!! Annabel (Anna for short) has a cheeky personality. She leaves her togs at the pool on purpose she does this because she knows that if she doesn’t do this her mum won’t let her go to the pool the pool, to Annabel, is like a home to you or me.
Once when Anna was eight she was walking to the pool with her family. The wind was teasing her hair and upsetting her clothes. She walked in and wasn’t looking where she was going and walked straight into the pool. Her family laughed and laughed so she stormed off like a bear and hid in the changing rooms. Soon after she saw her dad hmmm she thought to herself her dad had been the one who laughed the hardest so she ran out and SPLASH she pushed him into the pool.
Amazing Annabel, as I said before, has a really cheeky personality and likes getting revenge. That is the story of Amazing Annabel I hope you liked it!!
By Amelia Bryant

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