One dark but clear sunny day sitting in the movies was BOLD BRADLEY. His hair is dark black and it is as long as a horses mane, very tight blacks skinny jeans and a black t-shirt and a dark grey jacket. To go with the fashion he wears a pair of vans which are light green with white poker dots. He is a rake and about 1 metre and 45 centimetres tall. Bradley has also got a light tan covering his arms and legs as well as having a pretty round face with a little bony chin poking out like a rubber.
Bradley has lots of moods but the mood that I usually see is his smile which is a bent sun. He is basically always happy and he is quite funny by telling jokes. Last but not least he is quite kind to his friends, his mum and dad by doing jobs without arguing as well as his two brothers and his one sister (sort of). Bold Bradley really likes to game on his three Nintendo ds’s and his two Nintendo dsi’s, his x-box 360, his black wii and his playstation 3. He likes to ride his bike to school and down to the park to do jumps, tricks and crazy stunts. Something that he scorns to do is to clean his room. It is a pig sty. The floor is so messy that you can barely see it except for a few spots and it is covered with toys mostly and dotted with some food rappers (but not many of them). Some of his friends that he hangs out with are Oliver, Daniel B, Jack, Josh, Dylan, Jed, Jordan G, Jourdyn A, Josh F, Anthony, George and I but that is only what I know.
Sometimes Bradley plays on his x-box 360 or his playstation3 all day until it his bedtime (which is about 10:30pm) then he starts to play his ds or his dsi all night until about 2:00am, and then he turns them off and goes to sleep. The morning after that he sleeps all morning until about 3:00pm in the afternoon and he is terribly tired. The next time he tried to play on one of his ds’s it turned on. Then it started to sizzle until it turned off and it was stuffed.
So that is the description of bold Bradley who is a real person and not a made up character and who really does like to game all night.
By B.K.G Matthews (Jonny)
Great work Jonny, you've got some great language features in your writing.
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is he really bold
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meaN AS GAGETS AND TECHNACLE STUFF FROM RYAN
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