Daniel's finished Character Description

Exciting Emma

On a very hot, sunny, musty day 18 year old Exciting Emma strolled out of her house in Hamilton on her merry way to work in the wood works store making shelves, tables and cabinets. Her short curly blond hair shimmering in the blazing sunlight and her dark orange sunglasses shielding her eyes from the blinding light. Her night black sneakers slapping the aged grey pavement with every step she took and her heavenly white t-shirt fluttering in the cool refreshing breeze. Emma loves lego with a passion and absolutely adores the colour orange, in her spare time Emma likes to BMX and mountain bike. Emma is a very kind hearted girl and always thinks of everyone else. She is smart, fit, very truthful and very thoughtful. Emma has quite a few friends like Alice, (the shy one) Ruby, (the smart one) Charlotte (the athletic one) and Sarah (the understanding one).
One day, out of the corner of Emma’s shinning blue eyes she spotted something blowing across the deserted street. It danced around her black sneakers. She picked up the paper object and examined it. “It’s a fifty dollar note” she whispered to herself with a grin like the cresented moon. She was so happy you would think she had just won lotto.
Emma has a little brother, a little sister and her dad down in Wanganui and she goes and visits them whenever she can. That $50 Emma found on the street wasn’t for her it was for her little brother and she also got a little something for her little sister and she didn’t forget her awesome dad. So that shows how kind-hearted Exciting Emma really is.
This non –fiction story was written by Emma’s little brother: Daniel.