Wednesday, 13 April 2011

Fat Fred
Drooling over American hot dogs slouched Fat Fred. Fat Fred is a dreadfully plump guy. He loves to eat hot dogs dripping with onions, mustard and tomato sauce. He adores all kinds of ice cream and is crazy about chocolate. Fat Fred has jumbo ears, he looks even more weird with no hair, lots of scars and has a black monobrow stands out a lot. I think he needs to shave his tummy it is so hairy and has a and Fat Fred is quite rancid he smells like rotten eggs. Since Fat Fred doesn’t have any money hi clothes are rugged his sleeves are torn up, one is long the other is short. Gumboots are the fashion for Fat Fred so he wears black gumboots; his pants have holes in them as he keeps tumbling down the stairs they got torn on the knees. Lots of people wonder why he can’t button his pants up well it because he is so fat so he uses bailing twine to hold them up.
Fat Fred doesn’t have any friends as a result of having a ruthless personality he is a very beastly man. There is no job Fat Fred can accomplish because he is lazy, uncoordinated and doesn’t listen to anyone. Once when Fat Fred was tramping down Kiwi Street he scarfed a little girl’s triple chocolate ice cream and gobbled it up in one mouth fill then he shoved the little girl over. She grazed her knee and was a sad baby for the rest of the day. Bzzzz Fat Fred was tasered to the ground by the little girl’s mother, “you filthy fat man you should go to jail’’ she screamed out loud. Now, Fat Fred  is a lousy guy because he doesn’t have any family they all died in a huge fire so Fat Fred lives alone down the main  ally way. He is a lonely guy who only lives with stray cats but there are also lots of mini mice which he doesn’t like at all.
 Fat Fred doesn’t do much he normally steals ice creams off people, sneaks hot dogs from the stand and at night he robs the chocolate factory.    Sometimes Fat Fred gets so hungry he feels like eating a herd of cattle. Fat Fred doesn’t eat decent food he fills his tummy up on yuck food out of the garbage or steals junk food off people or out of shops because he doesn’t have any money to buy things like burgers or steaks not even vegetables. A lot of people feel sorry for Fat Fred but they are too scared to give him things or money because of what he has done to them in the past.
This charter description is not true but I hope you enjoyed my fictional charter description about Fat Fred.
By Cheyann McDougall.      

5 comments:

  1. sweet story cheyann i really liked it is the best story in the world
    from cheyann

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  2. nice story chey i liked the way you described fat fred so well
    From Amelia

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  3. no i really fell hungry anyone got anything to eat

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  4. wat a mean story our even if i havn't read yet anyway chey
    Jordyn

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