Tuesday, 22 March 2011

Amelia's Character Description - Opening Paragraph

Amazing Annabel

Lying in the middle of a swimming pool lay, surrounded by friends, lay Amazing Annabel. She just lay there on her floating sunbather twisting her short, golden brown hair around her fingers complete with long white finger nails. Her hazel brown eyes darting all around the heated pool making sure her things were still in her locker and there they were. Her dainty little blue and white checkered top was hanging out along with her plain black skirt and red high heels. She always had her little gang of girls Katy, Isabella and Chloe.

By Amelia Bryant

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