Tuesday, 22 March 2011

Alanah's Opening Paragraph (Character Description)

Sweetie Sarah

On a warm Sunday night tensely a baby was born on the 21st of March 1999. She smelled like calming perfume. Two years later sweetie Sarah was two years old. She has greenish blue eyes, blonde hair and reddish pink cheeks. She was cute. Sweetie Sarah wore a fantastic top. On the fantastic top were some butterflies and bees she even wore a skirt with butterflies, bees and flowers. When it was bed time her mum had sleeping capsules. Sweetie Sarah’s home is wonderful. Her garden has veggies, flowers and trees. Sweetie Sarah’s room is fantastic. When they had to move out instead of buying one, they sold their house then used the money to get the things to build a new house. Sweetie Sarah’s room had no colour but just brown wood. Lucky there were heaps of coloured paints. She had asked Mum if she could paint her room. She had painted the sky, flowers, grass, butterflies, bees and her Mum and herself. She did it fantasticly. Sweetie Sarah did it all by herself. She did a fantastic job. She’s not like any other ordinary two year old. Sweetie Sarah has a plump brother who eats heaps of junk like meat patties. Her Mum is called Georgina. Georgina is beautiful like a princess. She has heaps of boyfriends like Bradley.

By Alanah

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